14 thoughts on “Parasite”

  2. shenoy007 May 17, 2020 / 5:46 am

    The vividness of the comparison really impacts! Wonderful! Maybe rename the poem? Dialogue does not sound right to me.

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      • shenoy007 May 20, 2020 / 4:34 am

        Parasite? I do not know. You are the poet!

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      • Aseem Chandawarkar May 20, 2020 / 9:46 am

        I like the new title and that you have changed it, but the url of the poem does not change. I noticed this on my blogsite some years ago, and has made me somewhat averse to changing the title of any post after it is published.

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      • Satyen Hombali May 20, 2020 / 10:12 am

        Yes I have noticed that too. The only recourse is to delete the post and post it again with the new title, but that will annoy my 160 followers, including you… 😊

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  3. Jean Lopez May 17, 2020 / 8:04 am

    Sadly true

    On Sat, May 16, 2020 at 11:40 PM Poems For You And Me wrote:

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  4. Aseem Chandawarkar May 17, 2020 / 2:39 pm

    Having seen the evolution of this poem, I am fascinated by the confluence of creative forces! Thanks for crediting me on the sketch; in full transparency, may I say it was inspired by Matisse’s Blue Nude https://www.moma.org/audio/playlist/6/316 Matisse did not call it “despair”, but that is what I saw in this painting, hence the name I gave the sketch.

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  6. Arapurayil T Mathew May 18, 2020 / 4:47 am

    Very nice poem. Hope there will be an equilibrium and a peaceful co-existence of mankind and earth

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